Secret admirer Letter advice?

I’m looking for feedback on the letter I’ve written to my crush. Please provide feedback.

I remember the first time I saw you. It was from a distance. The long dark hair, seductive legs, perfect fingers draped at your sides. Only to approach and be introduced to not only you but that brilliant smile and gorgeous face. To hear you speak with a soft sexy voice. I believe I trembled inside as I do now while writing this. How could it come to be? That I was to be accompanied at that moment by such an elegant, feminine and perfumed woman as you? To gaze into those eyes only to get lost? To hear the youthfulness in your laughter? Beyond those beautiful and fine clothing you wear over your seductive curves, there is another “accessory” you always wear that makes you even more lovely: your true smile, open and constant, proper to cheer up those individuals around you. It makes me wild. As much as I try to focus on work, traffic or housework, I can’t forget your image, your smile, your playfulness and even your silence, when you have that contemplative look. Your strength and courage excite me. Your ability to voice your opinion and stand tall is enticing and attractive. You fascinate me from any angle that I look at, because you are someone special from North to South, from East to West and, above all, in your impenetrable heart and your youthful soul. I’d walk a thousand miles just to touch you. And a thousand more to kiss you all over. To bring you pleasure and put an everlasting smile on your face. My hunger to hold and handle you in my arms grows more each time we interact. Keeping you in my mind is as addictive as it is satisfying. My imagination takes me places that feel fulfilled. My dreams comforted with moments of tying fingers together as we hold hands embracing the moment and pulling each other closer together.

Feverishly under your spell,
I will not tell.

What do you think?

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  1. Dude, I have to say that it is really written well. I have to ask on how long do you know her? I know some women who would totally have my ass if I were to say something like them having ‘seductive legs’, but maybe it’s just the women I know (being subjected to their cruelty is something I do not wish to happen again). The ‘Beyond those beautiful and fine clothing you wear over your seductive curves, there is another “accessory” you always wear that makes you even more lovely: your true smile, open and constant, proper to cheer up those individuals around you’? Rad, man. Embarrassing to say that it had me spotting a few red tones myself.

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